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- SCOTLAND!!
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1 comment:
You start off nicely--love that first shot. I would add a shot of people waiting so you break up the two close-ups.
The last two shots look essentially the same. Maybe get down low for one or shoot a medium shot of people walking across.
I'm not really sure how it ends...maybe shoot behind them so they're walking away?
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