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- its raining sweets, hallelujah, its raining sweets!
- Gently Down the Stream
- congaaaa time!
- toga time
- Essay Response #3
- Response #2: Editing Photos
- scotland - beware of the wobblestones!
- Response Essay #1
- SCOTLAND!!
- shopping at morrisons :)
- grantham
- and...run!
- ££
- visual story 2
- visual story 1
- can you just say lollipop one more time?
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1 comment:
Think about your composition on your next one...
I wish you had another shot here...maybe a close-up of someone pouring the drink for you...emphasizing that it is indeed RUM that you're drinking. Or maybe a line of empty drinks to show that this is what the place looks like after you've had a few.
Maybe start with a "clear" shot of the place?
Otherwise, good storytelling.
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